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how to hate your lover by ~withL0VE:iconwithL0VE:



it's difficult to pinpoint the moment i stopped touching you.
it happened subtly, one of those mornings
just before i opened my eyes.
and then our bodies didn't quite fit together anymore and
your speech became little pieces of dust,
collecting on my clothes.

now when you look at me my heart collapses and i can hardly breathe.
every word you speak curls me farther inside myself and
i imagine that this crushing feeling is your hands,
wrapped around my throat.
out of your angel eyes pours the devil,
greedy mouthed and insatiable,
possessing me.

love and hate hold hands in the dark and breathe in a mirror pattern,
in then out then in,
taking turns.
©2009 ~withL0VE
:iconwithl0ve:

Author's Comments

i hate this, i don't know. it just needed to come out and when it did it was half-formed like an aborted baby.

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:iconrainydaydarling:
I didn't think it was that bad.
It's pretty well formed for an aborted thought.

--
Anyone can state facts they believe to be true,
but it takes a true artist to lie about the world.


there's a story here

~WritersGroup
:iconk-mo222:
this is raw and really, i love it.
:iconwithl0ve:
:heart: thank you! it's amazing to think , how much your anxieties and past can warp you

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